*Gargle* *Gargle* *Gargle*
...This is why I don't usually critique erotica.
Well, what can be said? The Structure is...impressive-YES!! And the texture of the clothes is actually developed, while the body fat appears natural in it's pushing out in areas not covered by clothes. Hell, the coloring is so basic that it's awesome, balancing between the developed character and the simplicity of the terrain she's present on.
My problem is, well...the face, more specifically the mouth. The character's shoulder blocks view of the lower jaw that it either appears to be closed, or not there at all until you get a closer view (The closer you get, the harder it is to break from the gravitational pull of the twin moons...wait that's no moon, it's a space station!! )
The other problem I have is that this artist focuses mostly on this kinda thing that he forgets to sometimes make more interesting scenes, then again, many of his characters are interesting, and an artist's greatest strength is in his interest and muse, so I guess I can't complain further then that, especially since...nvm.

Bottom Line (ignore the pun), a great and professional piece that goes into the erotic, and to be honest, the best erotica is that which can convey a message of deeper meaning while pulling off the obvious, and this artist truly has conveyed that's not ugly to be fat, that it's beautiful to be one of fertility and mass, and that beauty can be found within even the lowest of regions-dammit!
All he needs to do is avoid cutting off parts in a way that ruins the image, though he has proven that distraction can be used to an artist's advantage.